Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Haiku - Menopause moments

This is a collage, I created with photo shop.
It brings a smile to my face.
I use it now, for my computer back ground.

I have been thinking of words to write for haiku my heart. I am just learning how to do this form of writing.
It is 5/7/5 syllables.
The title finally came to me tonight.
Menopause moments
Then a few different haiku's 

1. The fire department 
saved me from the moment of
uncontrollable rage!
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2. The kindness of others
set my heart ablaze with joy
My soul is now free .
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3.The water from the spring
brought profound healing, that joy  
has refreshed my soul

What words come to you, through this image?

12 comments:

  1. That no matter how big your problem may seem, there are others there to lend a hand.

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  2. man versus parrot
    little nest with a gold heart
    Sending him afloat
    :-)
    That was fun. I like your first one with the fire department best!

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  3. Great interactive Haiku's with a two way flow and influencing each other!! Nice photo shop image that you have created to go with the poems :)

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  4. Interesting, although I'm no expert on menopausal stuff.

    Have a nice day, Boonie

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  5. laughter and relief, from those familiar moments!

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  6. Fire inferno
    Cooling thoughts save me for now
    Live another day

    Having a wife, 5 Grand daughters, a sister and a Mom, I have some experience with Menopause, from a distance, of course. Stay cool, because you are.

    Peace.

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  7. i cannot top spadoman's comment
    "stay cool, because you are"

    too funny! laughter, never underestimate the healing there in.
    thanks for being here...

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  8. Great.. Look at my second entry ..you will see me smiling..and happy..

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  9. such stuff and nonsense
    firemen blasting water stream
    parrot in a bowl

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  10. Laughter, friends, self-expression and of course, firemen, what more could a chick going through the change need !
    In the words of the wise Spadoman, Stay Cool !

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  11. I can completely relate to those menopause moments. Great image - the parrot looks absolutely refreshed! :)

    Deb

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  12. The second haiku...O, I envy you--a blazing heart and a free soul!

    Two Maidens Dancing

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